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【題目】最近，某英語報正在組織一次英語征文活動，邀請讀者圍繞“Science and technology is changing our life greatly”這個話題，談談科學技術給我們的日常生活帶來的變化。請你根據(jù)圖畫提示寫一篇短文應征，談談你家三代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式。

注意：詞數(shù)80左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】With the development of science and technology, our way of life has been changing all the time. My grandmother told me she usually covered a long distance to a small shop in town to buy goods. Later, supermarkets have been opened in our town，so my mother would like to go shopping in a supermarket near my house because it is very convenient.

In recent years，online shopping has become popular. Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like online.

I think, in the future, we can let robots do the shopping.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文，圍繞“Science and technology is changing our life greatly”這個話題，談談科學技術給我們的日常生活帶來的變化。請根據(jù)圖畫提示寫一篇短文應征，談談你家三代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式。根據(jù)所給內容和圖畫提示列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇看圖作文，內容齊全，真實，想象合情合理，句中使用高級句子。our way of life has been changing all the time.現(xiàn)在完成進行時態(tài)巧妙運用；supermarkets have been opened in our town，現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；because it is very convenient.原因狀語從句；Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like online.what引導賓語從句；另外，With the development of，Later, In recent years，的運用為文章增色添彩。