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　　假如學(xué)校開設(shè)的“英語角”本周五下午活動，由你組織你班的活動，請你起草一份通知，向全班同學(xué)宣讀.

通知內(nèi)容要點如下：

(1) 前段時間，大部分同學(xué)積極參加英語角活動，聽力和口語水平提高很快；

(2) 本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操場北邊的花壇周圍活動；

(3) 參加人員：所有的學(xué)生都可以參加.本校的英語老師，包括你校的姊妹學(xué)校--來自美國俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)(Dayton Middle School of Ohio)的25名學(xué)生.

(4) 請準(zhǔn)時參加，是與姊妹學(xué)校的學(xué)生交流、交友的好機會.

注意：

(1) 不要逐條翻譯，力爭要點清晰，句子流暢.

(2) 詞數(shù)：100左右.

(3) 生詞：姊妹學(xué)校companion school．

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

寫作思路點撥： (1) 人稱：第一人稱，第三人稱 (2) 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在完成時，一般將來時 (3) 短語：English Corner英語角；flower bed花壇；to the north of在……的北邊；most of us我們中大多數(shù)人；take part in參加；in the past前段時間；achieve progress取得進步；listening English聽力英語；speaking English口語英語；join in參加；what's more更重要的是；companion school姊妹學(xué)校；Dayton Middle School of Ohio美國俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)；make friends with與……交朋友 (4) 要點 1)前段時間，大部分同學(xué)積極參加英語角活動．聽力和口語水平提高很快 2)本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操場北邊的花壇周圍活動 3)參加人員：所有的學(xué)生都可以參加，本校的英語老師及你校的姊妹學(xué)校， 來自美國俄亥俄州代頓中學(xué)的25名學(xué)生 4)這是與姊妹學(xué)校的學(xué)生交流、交友的好機會，請準(zhǔn)時參加. (5) 草擬要點成英語 1) most of the students to have taken an active part in the activity of“the English Corner”, to have achieved progress in listening and speaking English 2) to hold “the English Corner” between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. this afternoon around the flower bed to the north of the playground 3) all the English teachers to join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. to join in “the English Corner” 4) to be a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them, not to miss it (6) 擴展要點成句 1) Most of the students took an active part in the activity of “the English Comer”. Much progress in listening and speaking English has been achieved. 2) This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. 3) All the English teachers of the school will join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join in “the English Corner”. 4) This is a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (7) 合理調(diào)整人稱，適當(dāng)調(diào)整句型，增加必要句型，擴展要點成句 May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you. This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. Most of us took an active part in the activity in the past. And much progress in our listening and speaking English has been achieved. In the afternoon all the English teachers of our school will join us in the activity. What's more, 25 students from our companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join us in “the English Corner”. This is really a good chance for us to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (8) 語言運用提示 這是一篇口頭通知，要用第一人稱口吻來寫，通知開頭可用May I have your attention，please?來寫，以便引起通知對象的注意；表示將要發(fā)生的被動動作用將來完成時的被動語態(tài)；表示現(xiàn)在完成的被動動作用現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài).