假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)∧，并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Jack,

I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in a fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer.

In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket. I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met . Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.

Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

1.第一句：pleasing改成pleased

2.第一句：greatly改成great

3.第二句：your改成my

4.第三句：In改成At

5.第三句：as和shopping之間加a

6.第四句：去掉have

7.第五句：and改成but

8.第五句：works 改成work

9.第六句：after 改成before

10.第七句：solve改成solving

【解析】

試題分析：

1.pleasing改成pleased. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)Be pleased to do sth.開(kāi)心地做某事。故將pleasing改成pleased.

2.greatly改成great. 分析語(yǔ)境a great time：一段精彩的時(shí)光。Greatly為副詞，此處應(yīng)該用形容詞詞性，故將greatly改成great.

3.your改成my. 分析語(yǔ)境Now I would like to share your working experience with you during the past summer. 我將和你分享我的暑期工作經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)為“我的工作經(jīng)歷”，故將your改成my.

4.

5.as和shopping之間加a. 分析語(yǔ)境I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket我被一家超市雇為一名導(dǎo)購(gòu)。A shopping guide：一名導(dǎo)購(gòu)。名詞前應(yīng)有冠詞修飾，此處不是特指，所以用a表示泛指。故在as和shopping之間加a.

6.

7.and改成but. 根據(jù)原文 Sometimes I was laughed at和I was praised for my wonderful works by many people有時(shí)候我會(huì)被嘲笑，大多數(shù)情況下，許多人因我出色的工作表現(xiàn)而夸獎(jiǎng)我�？芍�，前后文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將and改成but.

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