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【題目】假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見．請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：

1．說明你是該報的忠實(shí)讀者

2．贊賞該報優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

1)兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞

2)介紹名人成功故事

3．提出建議：

刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語己為你寫好；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning , and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，根據(jù)提示信息完成一封信。寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.，本句中包含了so that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，又包含了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句。Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.本句中用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，又用了how a person can work hard to make the world a better place充當(dāng)賓語的賓語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語by doing both …and …等，以及副詞first用于引出所要寫明的內(nèi)容。