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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Have you ever been to Wuzhen? It is such beautiful a village that I have already visited it many times. Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6,000 years. Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams. Local people live old houses, and they are very friendly. During the day, you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams. The scene at night is attractively as well. There are many kind of round and square light. Every time I look at the pictures for which I took, I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!

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【解析】本文主要講述了浙江嘉興的烏鎮(zhèn)以及作者去烏鎮(zhèn)旅游的經(jīng)歷和感想。

第一處：考查so和such 的用法。“It is such beautiful a village ”，so+形容詞/副詞+(a/an)+(單數(shù))復數(shù)可數(shù)名詞／+that+從句，such+(a/an) +形容詞/副詞+單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞。故將such 改為so。

第二處：考查固定用法。“ Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6, 000 years.”，be located in“位于”。在句中省略了be，located 在句中作狀語。故將Locating改為Located。

第三處：“ Like much small towns in the southern area,”，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，many修飾可數(shù)名詞。故將much改為many。

第四處：“Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams.”，Like much small towns in the southern area是介詞短語，作狀語，主句要用it來代指前面提到的Wuzhen，that代指的是“那個，那”。故將that改為it。

第五處：“Local people live old houses,”，live表示“居住”是不及物動詞，后面不能直接接名詞，故在live后加in。

第六處：“ you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams.”，or前后的動詞形式應保持一致。故將sitting 改為sit。

第七處：“ The scene at night is attractively as well.”，attractively是副詞，副詞不能作表語。故將attractively改為attractive。

第八處：考查名詞單復數(shù)。“There are many kind of round and square light.”, many修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)。故將kind改為kinds。

第九處：“Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,”，which引導定語從句，修飾 the pictures，took the pictures表示“照照片”，不需要介詞for。故將 for刪去。

第十處：“I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!”，這里 amazing water village特指前文所說的烏鎮(zhèn)，故將an改為the。