Question

【題目】當(dāng)前，手機(jī)在人們生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色，但過度使用手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，顯露出諸多弊病。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 描述漫畫內(nèi)容；

2. 分析漫畫所揭示的問題；

3. 提出你的看法。

注意：

1. 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；

3. 詞數(shù)120左右;

4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

As is shown in the picture,_____________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

As is shown in the picture, many people bend their heads and use their fingers on the keys of the phone whenever they are walking, riding or driving in the street. Being addicted to their mobile phones, they ignore the person around him/her. Actually recent years have witnessed an increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s daily life.

The consequences of this phenomenon can never be neglected. One of the most obvious one is that too much use of mobile phones may do harm to the people’s physical health, especially eyesight. Besides, it will be difficult for them to concentrate on their walking and learning, or even daily life. Last but not least, it may negatively impact the relationship among people due to less face to face communication.

As far as I am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid depending too much on them. It’s better to get in touch with others by other means such as reading and sports to enrich ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：

本題是一篇看圖作文，首先要正確理解圖畫意思并合理想象。漫畫講述“人們過度使用手機(jī)，連過馬路也要看手機(jī)”這一生活現(xiàn)象，然后再發(fā)表個(gè)人看法。如：這一現(xiàn)象怎樣發(fā)人深��？我們?cè)撛趺醋�？考生成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.結(jié)構(gòu)上可采用三段成文，第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫意思；第二段闡述這種普遍現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表議論；第三段發(fā)表個(gè)人看法，評(píng)述這種不正常行為以及說明怎樣改變這種現(xiàn)象。 2.時(shí)態(tài)：因?yàn)槭瞧毡楝F(xiàn)象，故應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，表達(dá)愿望時(shí)也可用將來時(shí)。 3.人稱： 描述圖畫意思用第三人稱，評(píng)述用第一或第三人稱。4.注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文所用高級(jí)詞匯、句型：

1. be addicted to

2. do harm to

3. focus on/ concentrate on

4. Recent years have witnessed an increasing use of the mobile phone in the students’ daily life.

5. It may negatively impact the relationship among people due to less face to face communication.