Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(\)畫掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, which was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, so she was born in China. It was interesting that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy about collect stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be a engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】have--had

【2】which---who

【3】in---at

【4】so--although

【5】All--Both

【6】collect---collecting

【7】the football--football

【8】a--an

【9】harder--hard

【10】laughing--laugh

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于人物描述類，描述了自己的一個(gè)同學(xué)。

【1】have—had 考察動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)整篇文章可知，作者描述過(guò)去的事情，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故用had。

【2】which---who 考察定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞。本句為定語(yǔ)從句，修飾classmate，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)，故用who。

【3】in---at 考察介詞。此處為固定短語(yǔ)be good at擅長(zhǎng)，故用at。

【4】so—although 考察狀語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞。前后兩句的邏輯關(guān)系屬于讓步關(guān)系，故改為although。

【5】All—Both 考察代詞。根據(jù)上下文可知，作者指的是其父母兩人，故用both，all用于三者或者三者以上，故用both。

【6】collect---collecting 考察動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)形式。此處為be crazy about doing，后接doing，故用collecting。

【7】the football—football 考察冠詞。踢足球?yàn)閜lay football，不用定冠詞the。

【8】a—an 考察冠詞。Engineer 為元音發(fā)音開(kāi)頭，故用不定冠詞an。

【9】harder—hard 考察副詞。根據(jù)上下文可知，此句沒(méi)有包含比較含義，故不用比較級(jí)，故用hard。

【10】laughing—laugh 考察動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)形式。此句為結(jié)構(gòu)make sb do sth，所以需用不帶to的不定式，故用laugh。