Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 把缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(\)畫掉。

修改: 在錯的詞下畫一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, which was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, so she was born in China. It was interesting that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy about collect stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be a engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】have--had

【2】which---who

【3】in---at

【4】so--although

【5】All--Both

【6】collect---collecting

【7】the football--football

【8】a--an

【9】harder--hard

【10】laughing--laugh

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于人物描述類，描述了自己的一個同學。

【1】have—had 考察動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)整篇文章可知，作者描述過去的事情，故用一般過去時，故用had。

【2】which---who 考察定語從句關系詞。本句為定語從句，修飾classmate，關系詞在從句中作主語，故用who。

【3】in---at 考察介詞。此處為固定短語be good at擅長，故用at。

【4】so—although 考察狀語從句引導詞。前后兩句的邏輯關系屬于讓步關系，故改為although。

【5】All—Both 考察代詞。根據(jù)上下文可知，作者指的是其父母兩人，故用both，all用于三者或者三者以上，故用both。

【6】collect---collecting 考察動詞非謂語形式。此處為be crazy about doing，后接doing，故用collecting。

【7】the football—football 考察冠詞。踢足球為play football，不用定冠詞the。

【8】a—an 考察冠詞。Engineer 為元音發(fā)音開頭，故用不定冠詞an。

【9】harder—hard 考察副詞。根據(jù)上下文可知，此句沒有包含比較含義，故不用比較級，故用hard。

【10】laughing—laugh 考察動詞非謂語形式。此句為結構make sb do sth，所以需用不帶to的不定式，故用laugh。