17.請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,用英語給"中國日報"寫一篇簡訊,介紹我國著名的游泳運(yùn)動員--孫楊.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.出生日期:1991年12月1日;
2.出生地點:杭州;
3.個人情況:中國泳壇明星,中國人的驕傲;
4.畢業(yè)學(xué)校:浙江大學(xué);
5.專長:大學(xué)畢業(yè)后專攻長距離自由泳*;
6.成績:倫敦奧運(yùn)會獲兩塊金牌;2013年巴塞羅那**"世界錦標(biāo)賽"***男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠軍,4x 200米自由泳接力季軍,
7.并被評為本屆世錦賽最佳男運(yùn)動員,成為歷史上首次獲得這一獎項的亞洲游泳選手.
參考詞匯:自由泳*freestyle swimming   巴塞羅那**Barcelona    世界錦標(biāo)賽***championships
【寫作要求】
1.只能使用五個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容;
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校.
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫.

分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于介紹我國著名的游泳運(yùn)動員--孫楊的作文,這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維,將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來.寫作需要用第三人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般過去時,內(nèi)容要點包括:1.出生日期:1991年12月1日;2.出生地點:杭州;3.個人情況:中國泳壇明星,中國人的驕傲;4.畢業(yè)學(xué)校:浙江大學(xué);5.專長:大學(xué)畢業(yè)后專攻長距離自由泳;6.成績:倫敦奧運(yùn)會獲兩塊金牌;2013年巴塞羅那"世界錦標(biāo)賽"男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠軍,4x 200米自由泳接力季軍,7.并被評為本屆世錦賽最佳男運(yùn)動員,成為歷史上首次獲得這一獎項的亞洲游泳選手.
重點短語與句型:
be proud of對…感到自豪,驕傲
 concentrate on 集中注意力
win the third place 贏第三名
What's more而且,此外
高分句型一:Sun Yang,born in Hangzhou on Dec 1,1991,is a Chinese swimming star,who we Chinese are proud of.此句用了過去分詞born作后置定語,以及who引導(dǎo)的定語從句
高分句型二:What's more,Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships,becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history.此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語,順其自然的結(jié)果.

解答 Sun Yang,born in Hangzhou on Dec 1,1991,is a Chinese swimming star,who we Chinese are proud of(高分句型一).
After graduating from Zhejiang University he has concentrated on long-distance freestyle swimming.
Besides winning two gold medals in London Olympic Games,he even eventually achieved his goal of becoming champions in men's 400m,800m and 1,500m freestyle events in the World Swimming Championships in Barcelona.
At the same time,together with his teammates,he also won the third place in the men's 4x200 meters freestyle relay in the Barcelona World Championships.
What's more,Sun Yang was awarded the best male swimmer of 2013 World Championships,becoming the first Asian swimmer to win such an award in history.(高分句型二)

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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