Question

14．假如你是李華，你的朋友Linda最近很心煩，因?yàn)楦改笇λ�要求很�?yán)格，整天讓她學(xué)習(xí)禁止她做一些她想做的事情，比如上網(wǎng)、和朋友玩等．請你給她寫封信，進(jìn)行心理疏導(dǎo)并提出一些建議．應(yīng)包括以下兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：
1．簡述自己類似的經(jīng)歷；
2．提出至少兩條建議．
注意：詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Linda，
I can understand how you feel．When I was young，                                      

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的朋友Linda最近很心煩，因?yàn)楦改笇λ�要求很�?yán)格，整天讓她學(xué)習(xí)禁止她做一些她想做的事情，比如上網(wǎng)、和朋友玩等．請你給她寫封信，進(jìn)行心理疏導(dǎo)并提出一些建議．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：簡述自己類似的經(jīng)歷；提出至少兩條建議． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：heart to heart心貼心地；communicate with 與…溝通；even though即使；By the way順便說一下；is of some help有幫助的；
But after I talked to my parents heart to heart，we had a better understanding of each other．（高分句型一）
So try to communicate with your parents to let them know that you are wise enough to manage your own business well．（高分句型二）
By the way，it's understandable that your parents ask you to put your studies in the first place．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Linda，
       I can understand how you feel．When I was young，I had the same experience as you do．But after I talked to my parents heart to heart，we had a better understanding of each other．（高分句型一）So try to communicate with your parents to let them know that you are wise enough to manage your own business well．（高分句型二）To understand them better，you should always put yourself in their position．Don't you think that all parents in the world love their children even though they are sometimes strict and serious？If you can spend your time and money wisely，I am sure that your parents will trust you and you will enjoy more freedom．
       By the way，it's understandable that your parents ask you to put your studies in the first place．（高分句型三）
       I hope my advice is of some help to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．