Question

【題目】你是李華, 你很煩惱.最近,每天早晚, 你們小區(qū)廣場上都有很多人在跳廣場舞,持續(xù)時(shí)間長且噪音大, 給你和小區(qū)里其他人帶來了很多不便......請你給小區(qū)委員會(huì)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫封信,反映現(xiàn)象及其導(dǎo)致的不便(要求涉及生活,學(xué)習(xí)和工作等方面) 并提出合理建議.

注意: 1. 詞數(shù) 120左右

2. 短文的開頭 和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).

參考詞匯: 廣場舞 square dance 組織者 organizers

Dear Sir,

I'm writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which has made me terribly upset.

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Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, which does help to keep healthy. However, the long-time dancing and noise pollution caused by the loudspeaker really bring about unbearable inconveniences. We can't rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working. Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.

Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?

【解析】本文為提綱式作文。要點(diǎn)有：1. 小區(qū)廣場上都有很多人在跳廣場舞,持續(xù)時(shí)間長且噪音大, 給你和小區(qū)里其他人帶來了很多不便2.提出合理建議.

寫作步驟：1. 確定人稱，時(shí)態(tài)。 2. 確定要點(diǎn) 3. 列提綱