9.2016年5月至10月將在河北唐山行世界園藝博覽會.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三的學(xué)生李華,獲悉唐山世界園藝博覽會正在全國范圍內(nèi)招聘英語志愿者.請用英語寫一封自薦信,申請成為唐山世界園藝博覽會7月至8月的志愿者.信的內(nèi)容包括:
1.表達愿望;
2.提供至少三條自薦理由(例如:扎實的英語功底);
3.懇請獲準(zhǔn).
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).
提示詞:世界園藝博覽會World Horticultural exposition
Dear Sir or Madam,
I've read the news on the Internet that the World Horticultural Exposition will be held in Tangshan from May to October in 2016.
Sincerely,
Li hua.
分析 本文要求考生以李華的身份申請成為唐山世界園藝博覽會7月至8月的志愿者,文章要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài).要點:1.知悉信息并表達愿望:2016年5月至10月將在河北唐山舉行世界園藝博覽會.組委會正在全國范圍內(nèi)招聘志愿者,你希望能夠成為其中一員.2.自薦理由:英語水平很高,多次獲獎;性格熱情大方能與不同的人很好交流;時間充足,可以參加組委會各項活動;3.懇求批準(zhǔn):希望得到展示自身能力的機會,并希望以此弘揚中國文化.在寫作時,注意多使用高級句式和詞匯,如果可能,可以使用諺語來提升文章層次.
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范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理,全文分為三部分,第一部分表達個人愿望,第二部分介紹個人優(yōu)勢,第三部分懇請批準(zhǔn).要點完備,且在文章中適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容,使文章相對豐滿.在寫作手法上很重要高級句型的使用,如定語從句:…where I can meet visitors from all over the world.動名詞做主語:…being a volunteer there will be a wonderful practice for me.同時作者還使用了較多的連接成分,讓要點的連接更流暢,如besides,therefore等等.
English is my favorite subject and I can speak English fluently and I'm often praised for my English writing as well.(高分句型一)
Besides,I'm an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.(高分句型二)
Tangshan Horticultural Exposition will be a good chance to show Chinese culture,where I can meet visitors from all over the world.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I've read the news on the Internet that the World Horticultural Exposition will be held in Tangshan from May to October in 2016.I'm writing to apply for working as an English volunteer in July and August.
I'm presently a student of Senior 3,but I'll graduate tin June this year.So I'll be free in July and August.English is my favorite subject and I can speak English fluently and I'm often praised for my English writing as well.(高分句型一)Besides,I'm an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.(高分句型二)
Tangshan Horticultural Exposition will be a good chance to show Chinese culture,where I can meet visitors from all over the world.(高分句型三)Therefore,being a volunteer there will be a wonderful practice for me.I'll be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request.
Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.