Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假設(shè)你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上看到一所國外大學(xué)的招生信息 (admission information), 該大學(xué)對中國學(xué)生開設(shè)30多個專業(yè)（major），你對此非常感興趣,打算用英語撰寫一份個人申請，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1. 想申請的專業(yè)； 2. 個人優(yōu)勢； 3. 進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的設(shè)想。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；2. 書信格式已給出； 3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet. I’m writing to apply for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.

For one thing, I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university. For another, I have been the monitor during my school years, which has promoted my organizing ability. Having organized a few school activities successfully, I’m determined to be a manager as my dream job. Therefore, my plan is to join the Students’Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to learn some advanced management experience.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了自己的細(xì)節(jié)。運用了豐富的詞匯短語，如apply for申請，do well in擅長，be easy for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事很簡單，look forward to期待，participate參加，這個詞是一個很增加亮點的小詞，注意不要只會使用attend，join等低端詞匯。同時，for one thing, for anather, therefore等連接詞的使用也使文章更加順暢。