Question

3．請以一個 A Worried Mother 為名給一個報社寫一封信，反應(yīng)如下情況：
1）某些電視節(jié)目充滿了暴力，兒童常常效仿．
2）電視節(jié)目的廣告導(dǎo)致兒童總要求父母購買諸如糖果，玩具之類的東西．
3）兒童長期看電視導(dǎo)致近視．
4）要求報社能盡快刊登此信，以便讓大家進行討論．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封反映電視對孩子的負面影響的問題．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一點明要反應(yīng)的問題；二 闡述電視對孩子的負面影響；三 提出要求．
高分句型：
1．In addition，the advertisements cause them to ask their parents to buy what they see on TV，such as candies and toys．句子里what 做賓語從句they see on TV的賓語，表示"他們在電視里看到的"；such as 表示"例如"．
此外，電視節(jié)目的廣告導(dǎo)致兒童總要求父母購買諸如糖果，玩具之類的東西．
2．Also，sitting in front of the television set all day is bad for their eyes．句子里sitting in front of the television set all day 是動名詞做主語；is bad for 表示"對…有害"．
而且，兒童長期看電視導(dǎo)致近視．

解答 Dear Editor，
       Like most mothers I'm worried about the effect of television，especially on our children．（點明要反應(yīng)的問題）First，there is a lot of violence shown on TV，and many children copy what they see．In addition，the advertisements cause them to ask their parents to buy what they see on TV，such as candies and toys．【高分句型一】Also，sitting in front of the television set all day is bad for their eyes．【高分句型二】As a result，many children have to wear glasses and I believe it is because of the long hours they spend watching TV．（闡述電視對孩子的負面影響）
     I hope my letter can be published in your newspaper as soon as possible so that this could be discussed among people．（提出要求）
                                                   A Worried Mother

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