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3．假如你是天水市市某一中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，一直和你在美國(guó)留學(xué)的姐姐李花（英文名Flora）練習(xí)用英語(yǔ)通信．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告訴她近況，內(nèi)容包括：
1．詢(xún)問(wèn)姐姐近況；2．告訴姐姐你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)狀況以及父母健康狀況．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Flora，
How are you？I am writing to you again becauseI am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）Are you still missing the unique snacks in our hometown？Do you still need to read piles of books every week？
As for myself，things are going rather smoothly．I have fallen in love with my school and have played an active role in the students'basketball games recently．I often go out with my classmates as volunteers to help children in village schools to learn English on weekends．Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）Don't worry．
Looking forward to your reply．Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是天水市市某一中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，一直和你在美國(guó)留學(xué)的姐姐李花（英文名Flora）練習(xí)用英語(yǔ)通信．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告訴她近況，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：詢(xún)問(wèn)姐姐近況；告訴姐姐你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)狀況以及父母健康狀況．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be eager to 渴望做某事；As for至于，關(guān)于；fall in love with愛(ài)上；play an active role 起積極的作用；
Thanks to幸虧，由于；make great progress取得巨大進(jìn)步；Look forward to盼望；
I am writing to you again because I am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）
Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Flora，
      How are you？I am writing to you again because I am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）Are you still missing the unique snacks in our hometown？Do you still need to read piles of books every week？
      As for myself，things are going rather smoothly．I have fallen in love with my school and have played an active role in the students'basketball games recently．I often go out with my classmates as volunteers to help children in village schools to learn English on weekends．Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
      Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）Don't worry．
      Looking forward to your reply．Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．