Question

請你根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
It doesn't really matter whether your glass is half empty or half full. Be thankful that you have a glass and that there's something in it.
注意： ①無須寫標題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

In our journey of life, it's our great fortune to meet with something or someone. Be grateful for what they bring us and cherish what we have, no matter they are rich or poor, happy or sad, good or bad. Just like our drinking glass, whether half full or half empty, we are lucky to have such a glass and own what there is in it.   
Take Helen Keller, a famous American writer as an example. Deprived of sight and hearing by a disease, she became disabled when she was young. Instead of feeling depressed and complaining “Why Me”, she chose a positive attitude to life and regarded what she encountered as the best gift God gave her. Bearing gratitude for life within, she met with her lifelong teacher Sullivan and finished her famous novel “Three Days to See”. It was the painful times of her life that made her stronger, wiser and more loving.
Though pain is inevitable, suffering is optional. When we are experiencing hard times, it becomes more challenging to be grateful. Be grateful for our life with all its lessons and blessings, and success and happiness is just around the corner!

解析試題分析：本題屬于全開放性作文，對考生駕馭語言的能力要求較高。做題時不但要注意語言的規(guī)范性、文章的連貫性、表達的得體性、詞匯句式的豐富性等一般書面表達題要求達到的水準，還要牢記題目要求，圍繞話題闡述觀點，所舉事例要能證明自己的觀點，有緊密的相關性。
考點：書面表達。
【亮點】本文較好的完成了題目規(guī)定的任務。文章第一段開宗明義：生活旅程中我們碰到的人和事都是我們的財富。第二段以海倫凱勒為例，說明對待生活中不幸的積極態(tài)度是她取得人生成功的關鍵因素。最后一段點題：不幸難以避免、痛苦并非必然。從其遣詞造句來看，作者對英語語言有相當?shù)鸟{馭能力。作者使用了一系列高級詞匯，如：fortune, grateful, cherish, deprive sb. of sth. encounter, inevitable, optional, blessing; 獨立主格結構bearing attitude for life within等。