Question

現(xiàn)在各種野生動(dòng)物日趨減少，有些已經(jīng)瀕臨滅種的邊緣。假設(shè)你是王平，結(jié)合以下幾點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)給WWF寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)他們幫助拯救那些野生動(dòng)物。
1. 建立野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)；
2. 見(jiàn)到獵殺野生動(dòng)物者立即向“野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)”反映；  
3. 積極宣傳保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的重要性；
4. 禁止亂砍濫伐；
5. 禁止用野生動(dòng)物的皮毛做衣服；也不吃野味。
參考詞匯：保護(hù)區(qū) protection regions 協(xié)會(huì) association
字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120字
可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，但不能逐句翻譯。勿使用真實(shí)姓名。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。
Dear WWF,
Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year.

Answer 1

Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year. So how to protect the wildlife draws increasing attention. My advice is as follows.
First, the government should set up some protection regions for wild animals where no one can hunt them. Once found, he or she must be reported to the Wildlife Protection Association. Second, we would like to promote the people’s awareness of protecting wild animals. Third, we had better not cut down as many trees as we wish as the forest is home of the wild animals. Last but not least, we are supposed not to kill wild animals for their fur or eat their meat.
Please help the wild animals and I am strongly convinced that we will live with them in peace with your help.
Yours truly,
Wang Ping

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。要求給WWF寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)他們幫助拯救那些野生動(dòng)物。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的the government should set up some protection regions for wild animals where no one can hunt them.這里用了where引導(dǎo)的地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)從句，I am strongly convinced that we will live with them in peace with your help.使用了賓語(yǔ)從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，象First. Second, Third, Last but not least,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。