Question

16．寒假即將來(lái)臨，你班同學(xué)在口語(yǔ)課上討論假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同看法．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇記述討論內(nèi)容的短文，并談?wù)勀愕募倨诖蛩悖?br />

	優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)
待在家中	舒適、能好好休息，和親人、同學(xué)相聚	失去開闊眼界的機(jī)會(huì)
外出旅游	有機(jī)會(huì)和不同的人交流，豐富自己的經(jīng)歷	花費(fèi)多，旅途不便

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
      3．參考詞匯：眼界horizon
The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．__________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 本文為記述討論內(nèi)容的短文．
主題為：寒假計(jì)劃
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，呆在家里的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；2，呆在家里的缺點(diǎn)；3，外出旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；4，外出旅游的缺點(diǎn)．

解答 The winter holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it a convenient and comfortable way to relax．Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives during the Spring Festival．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．Others prefer to go out for traveling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．
In my opinion，it would be better to stay at home，for I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework．（114w）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需根據(jù)所給的表格信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語(yǔ)法知識(shí)．