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16．最近一項健康調(diào)查表明，中學(xué)生的健康狀況不容樂觀．假設(shè)你是陽光外國語學(xué)校學(xué)生李華．為引起學(xué)生們對健康的重視，你校將舉辦一場英語演講比賽，主題為"How to Keep Healthy"．請你參照下列要點寫一篇演講稿，準備參賽．
1．簡述現(xiàn)狀；
2．分析原因；
3．提出建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）：
      2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
可能用到的生詞：營養(yǎng)不良 malnutrition  n．
                近視  near-sightedness  n．
                           How to Keep Healthy
     A survey on health is conducted in some high schools recently．
                                                                                                

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作．演講稿要注意口語話特征，要點要寫全，包括現(xiàn)狀，原因和建議．文章是要表達看法，要以第一人稱來寫．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
Overweight 肥胖
a lack of 缺少
improper diet 不當飲食
rather than 而不是
contribute to 對…有利
It is reported that the health of students in high school is not as good as supposed to be．
常用句型：it is reported that…據(jù)報道．
To change the situation，I will give the following advice．
動詞不定式作目的狀語．
we should have a healthy diet，especially fresh vegetables and fruit rather than snacks or fast food．
rather than連接對等結(jié)構(gòu)，表示轉(zhuǎn)折．

解答 參考范文
A survey on health is conducted in some high schools recently．It is reported that the health of students in high school is not as good as supposed to be．（高分句型一）Overweight，near-sightedness and malnutrition are common among students．（分析現(xiàn)狀）
A lack of physical exercise，not enough rest and improper diet are the main reasons．To change the situation，I will give the following advice．（高分句型二）Firstly，we should have a healthy diet，especially fresh vegetables and fruit rather than snacks or fast food．（高分句型三）Secondly，physical exercise is a must for us to keep fit．Finally，a good rest and a sound sleep can refresh us for the next day．（解釋原因）
In conclusion，proper diet，enough rest and regular exercise contribute to good health．（提出建議）

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．