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5．手機(jī)，通訊時代的代名詞，潮流的代養(yǎng)人．如今，全國約有幾億人在使用手機(jī)．手機(jī)在給我們帶來巨大便利的同時，也出現(xiàn)了諸多問題，請以"手機(jī)的利弊"為題，對此展開論述，并發(fā)表自己的觀點．（120字左右）

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Cell phones do play an important role in people's daily life，but every coin has its two sides．
手機(jī)確實在人們的日常生活中扮演著重要的角色，但凡事都有兩面．
高分句型二：
For one thing，the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly，not to mention its global service．
一方面，機(jī)器本身非常昂貴，本地服務(wù)費(fèi)用高昂，更不用說它的全球服務(wù)了．

解答 My Opinion on Cell Phones
　　Cell phones do play an important role in people's daily life，but every coin has its two sides（高分句型一）．
　　To start with，as a wireless mobile phone，it's convenient for the user at any time to contact others．Secondly，it's a helpful companion．With a multifunctional cell phone in hand，one can easily surf the net，downloading what he needs．
　　However，the cell phone has many disadvantages．For one thing，the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly，not to mention its global service（高分句型二）．For another，the radiation transmitted from the mobile phones might do harm to the user's health．
　　In my opinion，with its expenses being reduced sharply，its development will have a brighter future．Therefore its advantages will far outweigh its disadvantages

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．