分析 這是一篇演講稿,介紹一位你最尊敬的女性,描述這位女性,值得尊敬的原因及留給自己的深刻印象.要符合演講稿的語氣,注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài).根據(jù)所給提綱,列出要點(diǎn),并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí),采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng).語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔.根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料.同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性.
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如takes good care of,bring up,complain,thrifty and industrious,還運(yùn)用了so that,as,ever since引導(dǎo)的狀語從句等等.
She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school.(高級(jí)句型)
As our family is too poor to keep a servant,my mother has always to do very much work.(高級(jí)句型)
解答 My Mother
Good morning,every body!Today my topic is my mother.Do you love your mother?Of course,the answer is"yes".Mother is always ready to give everything she has to her children,not to receive.My mother is a kind and gentle woman.She is always very gentle.She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school.(高級(jí)句型)I have one brother and two sistets,so she gets four children in all.She gives us every comfort.We all love her and she loves us too.(描述形象)
My mother has too much to do in bringing us up.As our family is too poor to keep a servant,my mother has always to do very much work.(高級(jí)句型)She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day.She works hard,yet without complaining.(高級(jí)句型)(尊敬的原因)
She is also a thrifty and industrious woman.She saves every cent that she can and keeps everything in order.As she has been busy ever since she was young,she looks older than she really is.Her face is wrinkled,her hair becomes silver white,but she works as hard as ever.(深刻印象)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點(diǎn).根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn).設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等,把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來,構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯(cuò)誤.仔細(xì)閱讀全文,查找是否有錯(cuò),注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.
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