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3．假如你是Mike，你的好友Tom因兩次考試成績不理想而感到很煩惱，發(fā)來e-mail向你傾訴．請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容寫一封e-mail作為回復．
1．不必沮喪，認真分析（analyze）失敗原因．
2．增強自信心，避免犯同樣的錯誤．
3．失敗是成功之母，只要努力不放 棄，遲早會成功的．
注意：1．適當增加細節(jié)；2．不要逐字翻譯；3．詞數(shù)100左右．
Dear Tom，
    I have received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now．
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Best wishes and good luck．
                                            Yours，
                                             Mike．

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分析 1．本文屬于書信，也是提綱類作文的一種．2．審題后可知：短文要點已經(jīng)給出，可依據(jù)題目給出的三個要點分三段寫作，這部分可適當應用祈使句表達，也可用賓語從句表達自己的觀點或給出建議．短文應第一、二人稱適當變化．3．可以使用諺語"As we all know，failure is the mother of success．"以增加作文亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
祈使句以動詞原形開頭：做某事Do sth．；不要做某事 Don't do sth．；沮喪 lose heart；相信自己 believe in yourself；成功 success；失敗 failure；放棄 give up；遲早 sonner or later
You see，we will face many more exams in the future even if we leave school．（高分句型一）
Correct the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before，and find out why you made such mistakes．（高分句型二）
 As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
        I've received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now．However，I don't think it necessary for you to be so disappointed for failing twice．You see，we will face many more exams in the future even if we leave school．（高分句型一） So try the following：
        Correct the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before，and find out why you made such mistakes．（高分句型二）Try to avoid making them again in the next exams．Prepare for any exam and believe in yourself．
        As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型三）Let every failure be your stepping stone．If you try your best and never give up，you are sure to succeed sooner or later．
        Best wishes and good luck．
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Mike．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．