Question

請(qǐng)你針對(duì)當(dāng)前電視劇中插播太多廣告的現(xiàn)象，用英語(yǔ)向“China Daily” 的編輯寫(xiě)一封120詞左右的信，反映群眾的呼聲，指出其弊端，如：浪費(fèi)觀眾的時(shí)間、破壞故事的完整性、影響大家看電視的樂(lè)趣，并呼吁相關(guān)部門(mén)予以解決。

注意：可以適當(dāng)增減內(nèi)容，使全文連貫；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：插入—insert, 相關(guān)部門(mén)—relevant department, 中斷—interrupt

破壞—spoil,  影響—ruin,    充分考慮—allow for

Dear editor,

I’m writing to give you my opinions about the problem of too many advertisements being inserted in TV plays,____________________________________________           __________________

Truly yours,

Lee Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to give you my opinions about the problem of too many advertisements being inserted in TV plays, which interrupts TV plays frequently.

Audience can’t put up with that any more. They think TV stations violate their rights. Firstly, too many advertisements waste their time when people are waiting for favorite programs; secondly, the whole stories are spoiled with repeated advertisements inserted, making audience feel bored and impatient; lastly, the pleasure of audience in watching TV is severely ruined.

For the sake of audience, we expect that relevant departments can take some effective measures to limit the number and time of advertisements being broadcast. Meanwhile, TV stations should not think of nothing but making money. Instead, they must allow for audience’s interests, or more people will turn to the Internet to enjoy their favorite plays.

Truly yours,

Lee Hua

(137 words)

【解析】本文是考生熟悉的廣告的害處的議論文，要點(diǎn)基本上已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中只需要連詞成句即可，加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)注意使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯如Audience, interrupt, For the sake of等等。也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等。