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5．The"Clean Your Plate"campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists，which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table．The campaign，launched on Weibo，was soon joined by millions of netizens across China to fight against food waste．
The estimated annual waste of grain in China reaches 50million tons，enough to feed about 200million people for a year．
People from across China support the campaign．The Central Government has promised to take measures to reduce food waste，take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style．
More and more Chinese are saying"No"to food waste．Staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in Qingdao，Shandong province，Jan.24．"Did you empty the dishes today？"has become the most popular question in China．Showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among Chinese netizens．
In some restaurants there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food．Some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food，as part of the campaign to reduce waste．More and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1）以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2）以約120個(gè)詞就"光盤行動"的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：
①"光盤行動"產(chǎn)生的背景；
②"光盤行動"的作用；
③你對"光盤行動"的看法和呼求．
[寫作要求]
1）作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．
When some people started the"Clean Your Plate"campaign in an effort to reduce food waste，millions of netizens joined it and more and more people are taking real action to prevent food waste．
I'm quite delighted by this campaign．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．Unfortunately，I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste．It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．What an alarming waste it is!We should feel guilty to waste so much food．
It is high time for us to stop such waste．There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals．If all people take action to cut down food waste，a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed．
The"Clean Your Plate"campaign is really good and useful．Let's join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：in an effort to do （努力做某事），take action to do（采取措施做某事），be delighted by sth（因…高興），worry about（擔(dān)心），suffer from（遭受…），feel guilty （覺得羞愧），cut down（削減），a large quantity of（大量地），waste food（浪費(fèi)食物），join in （參加），eat up（吃光），instead of（代替）．
【高分句型一】
1．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．
此處是由連詞"while"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，主句為"millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day"，"while"意為"盡管"．
【高分句型二】
1．①Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，②there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．
①此處是由連詞"though"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，主句為"there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach"．
②此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"others"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語．
【高分句型三】
2．①It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，②which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．
①此處是主語從句，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+過去分詞+that+…"．
 ②此處是非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 When some people started the"Clean Your Plate"campaign in an effort to reduce food waste，millions of netizens joined it and more and more people are taking real action to prevent food waste．（概括）
I'm quite delighted by this campaign．As far as I know，while people in advanced countries don't have to worry about their meals，millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day．【高分句型一】Though most Chinese have enough food to eat，there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach．【高分句型二】Unfortunately，I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste．It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year．【高分句型三】What an alarming waste it is!We should feel guilty to waste so much food．（"光盤行動"產(chǎn)生的背景）
 It is high time for us to stop such waste．There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals．If all people take action to cut down food waste，a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed．（"光盤行動"的作用）
 The"Clean Your Plate"campaign is really good and useful．Let's join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：對"光盤行動"的看法和呼求）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．