12．假定英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Last week，I had a argument with my best friend．All of us went home with anger，After
finishing dinner，I began to do my homework．Sudden，my stomach hurt badly．My parents
took me the hospital immediately．The doctor said I eat unclean food and I needed to stay in
the hospital for two days，that made me feel worse and worried about my lessons．To my
surprised，my best friend came to see me．She was so worried about me and helped me about
my lessons．We understood it each other better and were back together．Now I have realized
that friendship is very importance to me．

分析 本文主要講述作者和最好的朋友吵架了，兩人都生氣地回到家了．在吃完晚飯后，作者的胃疼得很厲害，父母立刻帶作者到醫(yī)院．醫(yī)生說需要留院兩天．第二天下午，作者看到最好的朋友來看作者．她很是擔(dān)憂，雖然她們昨晚吵過架，但是現(xiàn)在又和好了．作者意識到了友誼是很重要的．

解答 Last week，I had a argument with my best friend．All of us went home with anger，After
finishing dinner，I began to do my homework．Sudden，my stomach hurt badly．My parents
took me∧the hospital immediately．The doctor said I eat unclean food and I needed to stay in
the hospital for two days，that made me feel worse and worried about my lessons．To my
surprised，my best friend came to see me．She was so worried about me and helped me about
my lessons．We understood it each other better and were back together．Now I have realized
that friendship is very importance to me．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)改為an 考查冠詞．a(chǎn)rgument是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指，因其讀音以發(fā)元音開頭，用不定冠詞an．
2．All改為Both 考查代詞．I和my best friend是兩個人，用both，表示"兩者"，all表示"三者及以上"．
3．Sudden改為Suddenly 考查副詞．修飾句子要用副詞．
4．加to 考查介詞．take sb．to some place意為"帶某人到某地方"，是固定搭配．
5．eat改為ate 考查動詞時態(tài)．此處講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
6．that改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞是前面整個句子，在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which．
7．surprised改為surprise 考查固定搭配．to one's surprise意為"使某人吃驚的是"，是固定搭配．
8．a(chǎn)bout改為with 考查固定搭配．help…with…意為"幫助（某人）做（某事）"，是固定搭配．
9．去掉it 考查代詞．已有相互代詞each other作賓語，it是多余的，要去掉．
10．importance改為important 考查形容詞．be動詞后用形容詞作表語．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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