Question

假定你是靈溪二高高一(6)班的學(xué)生李明。最近你收到了居住在新加坡的筆友Mike寄來的一封信。請(qǐng)你應(yīng)他的要求，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容寫一封回信，談?wù)剬W(xué)校的生活。

目前情況	在高一學(xué)習(xí)了一個(gè)半月，已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了高中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。
所學(xué)科目	中文、數(shù)學(xué)、英語、物理、化學(xué)、政治、歷史、地理、體育。
學(xué)校生活	上課時(shí)間從早上7點(diǎn)25開始，下午5點(diǎn)結(jié)束。之后做運(yùn)動(dòng)或到學(xué)校圖書館閱讀約半個(gè)小時(shí)，然后回家。十點(diǎn)半睡覺。
希 望	1. 秋天來了，溫州的秋天很舒服，歡迎他來玩。 2. 請(qǐng)他下次來信時(shí)談?wù)勊�在學(xué)校的生活。

 
Dear Mike,
I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.
                                                        
                                                        
I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.
With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Ming　

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.
After studied in senior one for one and a half months, I am used to the study and life in senior middle school. I have nine subjects: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry, politics, history, geography and P.E. School hours usually begin at 7:25 a.m. and end at 4:00 p.m. After class, we have sports, such as ball games and so on, or do some reading in the school library for about one hour. Then I go home. This is my school life.
Spring is coming . Wenzhou, a city near the sea, is very beautiful in spring. Welcome to Wenzhou, Mike.
I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.
With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Ming　

試題分析：考查提綱類短文寫作，本文是關(guān)于高中學(xué)習(xí)情況的說明，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，在寫作是要注意選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和句型來表達(dá)，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。