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2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Today is Mother's Day．I love Mother too much that I've done many things for her．In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon as I returned to home．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kind of vegetables and cooked a simple and delicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made by myself and said"Happy Mother's Day"to her．Then I tell her to pay more attention to her healthy and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do many housework from today on．Hearing the words，Mother moved to tears．
Today is the special day，warm and meaningful．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹了作者是如何為自己深愛的媽媽慶祝母親節(jié)的．

解答 Today is Mother's Day．I love Mothertoomuch that I've done many things for her．
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put it in the vase as soon
as I returnedto home．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy different kindof vegetables
and cooked a simple anddelicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card
that I made by myself and said"Happy Mother's Day"to her．Then Itellher to pay more attention
to her healthy and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do many housework from today on．
Hearing the words，Mother∧moved to tears．
Today is the special day，warm and meaningful．
詳解：
1．too改為so    考查固定句型    so…that…意為：如此…以至于…；本句的意思是：我是如此地愛媽媽，以至于我為她做了很多事情；故用that．
2．it改為them    考查人稱代詞的一致性    此處在句中作動(dòng)詞put的賓語，指代的是many flowers，故用them．
3．去掉returned后的to    考查副詞   由于home在本句中是副詞，所以不能用介詞修飾，故去掉returned之后的to．
4．kind改為kinds    名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   此處指的是各種不同種類的蔬菜，故用復(fù)數(shù)名詞kinds．
5．第二個(gè)and改為but    考查句意理解及連詞  這里指的是：一頓簡單但美味的晚餐，此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折而非并列關(guān)系；故用but．
6．tell改為told   考查時(shí)態(tài)    根據(jù)上文可知，此處指的是今天晚飯后發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，故用told．
7．healthy改為health    考查名詞    此處用在形容詞性的物主代詞her之后，在句中作介詞to的賓語，故用名詞health．
8．many改為much    考查形容詞   many修飾可數(shù)名詞，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞；此處用來修飾不可數(shù)名詞housework，故用much．
9．moved前加was    考查一般過去時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)      根據(jù)上文可知，此處描述的是今天晚飯后發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)；由于主語Mother與動(dòng)詞move之間構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以此處應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，故在moved前加was．   
10．the改為a   考查冠詞   此處用來修飾名詞day，表示泛指"一個(gè)特別的日子"；故用a．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語法知識(shí)與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．