2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Every high school student wants to get into famous universities and they spend most of their time review lessons．Nowadays，many graduates find hard to be admitted to famous universities．To be honest，only the small number of students can get so golden chances．Therefore，I have a strong desire to enter for Beijing University to study．To make my dream come true，I have to know my advantage and weaknesses．Besides，I must work hard or put all my time and energy into study．Most important，I must arrange my time properly．I was approaching my dream university with every effort．

分析 每個(gè)高中生都想進(jìn)入著名的大學(xué)．當(dāng)前，很多畢業(yè)生發(fā)現(xiàn)進(jìn)入名校不容易．老實(shí)說，只有少量的學(xué)生能得到好機(jī)會(huì)．然而，我強(qiáng)烈渴望進(jìn)北大．為了夢(mèng)想成真，我必須知道自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)和不足．還有就是我必須努力．最重要的是我要合理安排時(shí)間．每一份努力都讓我一步步接近我夢(mèng)想的大學(xué)．

解答 Every high school student wants to get into famous universities and they spend most of their time review lessons．
                                                                                                                                               reviewing
Nowadays，many graduates find∧hard to be admitted to famous universities．
                                              加it
To be honest，only the small number of students can get so golden chances．
                               a                                                  such
Therefore，I have a strong desire to enter for Beijing University to study．
However                                                去掉
To make my dream come true，I have to know my advantage and weaknesses．
                                                                         advantages
Besides，I must work hard or put all my time and energy into study．
                                        and
Most important，I must arrange my time properly．I was approaching my dream university with every effort．
         importantly                                                    am
1．review改為reviewing．句型搭配spend some time （in）doing sth花時(shí)間做某事．
2．加it．句型搭配find+it+形容詞+to do sth發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事怎么樣．it充當(dāng)形式賓語，正在的賓語是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．
3．the改為a．短語搭配a number of大量的，許多的；the number of表示…的數(shù)字是多少．
4．so改為such．句中是修飾名詞chances，要用such來修飾；so修飾形容詞和副詞．
5．Therefore改為However．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不是承接．
6．for去掉．動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤．enter是及物動(dòng)詞，后面不需要加介詞．
7．a(chǎn)dvantage改為advantages．名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤．句中and并列優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)概念．
8．or改為and．連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是并列關(guān)系，不是選擇．
9．important改為importantly．句中important是修飾整個(gè)句子內(nèi)容，修飾句子要用副詞．
10．was改為am．時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是說話時(shí)的情況，要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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