Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的添加、刪除或修改。

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful , and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 visit----visited

 but----so/and

 去掉go后面的to

 comfortably---comfortable

 were---was 

 for---with

 taking---taken

 dish---dishes

 such后面加a

 me---mine

【解析】

試題分析：

 根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語last month可知本句時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)，故動(dòng)詞用過去式。

 前后文是順延或因果關(guān)系，故連詞用and或so。

 anywhere是指地點(diǎn)的副詞，其前不用介詞。

 修飾名詞room，應(yīng)用形容詞。

 what引導(dǎo)的主語從句做主語，其意思是單數(shù)，故系動(dòng)詞were改為was。

 動(dòng)詞share常與介詞with構(gòu)成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。

 非謂語動(dòng)詞作后置定語，與所修飾詞是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用過去分詞。

 由several修飾，名詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。

 hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，第一次提到，前需加不定冠詞。

 雙重所有格的構(gòu)成是of +名詞性物主代詞或名詞所有格。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯語法掌握情況。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查時(shí)態(tài)，連詞，名詞，主謂一致，介詞，非謂語動(dòng)詞，所有格等語法項(xiàng)目，平時(shí)多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯。