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【題目】高二的同學(xué)將要參加小高考，部分同學(xué)遇到重要考試時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀，假如你是李明，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給〈〈明天報(bào)〉〉的編輯寫一封信反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

焦慮癥狀	建議
頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等。	1.考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃 2.考試期間正常作息 3. 睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠
	其它建議（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù): 120。信中已寫好的部分，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；

3．參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.). 復(fù)習(xí)－review(vt.) 食欲－appetite (n.)

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior One, Xiangshui High School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms (癥狀) of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior One, Xiangshui High School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

It is not surprising that many students feel nervous before they take an important examination. Some of us will feel dizzy while others feel tired and are not energetic any more. Some will suffer from lack of sleep and even lose the appetite. All these symptoms are caused by the pressure of the examination and definitely have a bad effect on our studies.

How to get rid of them? My suggestions are as follows. For one thing, we should make a proper plan for reviewing all the lessons, which can save us time. For another thing, we should have a good rest during the examinations, otherwise we should feel exhausted. Last but not least, if you want to have enough sleep, you can take a hot bath or drink some hot milk before you go to the bed. I think these measures are good for your sleep.

In addition, we can communicate with our parents, teacher or friends a bit more. They can give us a lot of valuable suggestions. Of course, you can also do some exercises to keep fit.

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文的屬于提綱類寫作，是關(guān)于考試焦慮癥的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，話題切合考生實(shí)際，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說，有很強(qiáng)的可寫性。要點(diǎn)是以提綱的形式給出的，要求考生有較強(qiáng)的整合能力，在寫作時(shí)充分利用連接詞，高級(jí)句型和詞匯，如果可能在文章結(jié)尾運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)，以使文章的層次更高。首先應(yīng)該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚，在發(fā)表個(gè)人建議的時(shí)候，可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)的句式和高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)給文章增色。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)suffer from遭受；have a bad effect on對(duì)。。有壞影響；For another thing另外一方面；In addition此外；communicate with與。。進(jìn)行交流；It is not surprising that many students feel nervous before they take an important examination.這個(gè)句子it做形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的不定式；