Question

13．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
Winners are not those who never fail but those who never give up．
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；             ②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合具體事例；   ④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 題目要求根據(jù)英文提示并結(jié)合事例寫(xiě)一篇短文．提示語(yǔ)的意思是"成功者不是從不失敗，而是從不放棄．如果我們成為一個(gè)成功的人，我們就必須做好充分的準(zhǔn)備，不怕失敗，不放棄"．作文不需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄提示語(yǔ)；除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；詞數(shù)在120詞左右；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性．
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：
高分句型一：
If they give up in face of failure，they will definitely not win in the end
如果他們放棄面對(duì)失敗，他們絕對(duì)不會(huì)贏得最終的勝利．
高分句型二：
However，he didn't lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end．
但是，他沒(méi)有灰心，堅(jiān)持自己的夢(mèng)想，直到他最終成為一個(gè)成功的首席執(zhí)行官．
范文使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，豐富了作文的內(nèi)容．

解答 There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do，but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win．If they give up in face of failure，they will definitely not win in the end（高分句型一）．
Mayun will never forget his experience．Twenty years ago，when he tried to find a job，he found the door to success closed before him one after another，just because of his bad-looking appearance．However，he didn't lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end（高分句型二）．
In conclusion，failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner，so never give up and keep on going until you win．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．