分析 本文是一篇提綱作文.根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,寫一篇短文,談談對電腦的看法.
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時.
寫作要點:1.電腦的好處; 2.電腦的弊端;3.個人看法
高分句型一
Second,in our free time,we can watch TV and listen to music on the Internet to make our school life colorful.
在本句中包含一個不定式短語make our school life colorful用作目的狀語,其中含有多個介詞短語用作狀語,in our free time時間狀語;on the Internet地點狀語.
高分句型二
But some students have different opinions,they think if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes.
本句為but連接的一個并列句.動詞think后面包含一個賓語從句if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes,從句中還有一個if引導的條件狀語從句,主句為it is bad for our eyes.
高分句型三
Some students even visit unhealthy websites,which is not good for their growth.
本句中含有一個which引導的非限制性定語從句.be good for sth對…有好處.
解答 Nowadays,computers play an important part in our lives,and they are very popular with students.Some students think computers are very useful,F(xiàn)irst,we can use computers to get some information to help us study.Second,in our free time,we can watch TV and listen to music on the Internet to make our school life colorful.(高分句型一) Third,we can make more friends through computers.(提出肯定觀點)
But some students have different opinions,they think if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes.(高分句型二) Some students spend too much time and money on playing computer games.As a result,it wastes us a lot of time and money.Some students even visit unhealthy websites,which is not good for their growth.(高分句型三)(反對觀點)
In my opinion,every coin has two sides.If we use computers properly,they can bring a lot of benefits to us.We had better not spend too much time on computers,otherwise,it would be bad for our study(表達個人看法)
點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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