【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

      假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

      增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

      刪除:把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。

      修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

      注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

      2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

      When I was in Junior Middle School, I once quarrel with my favorite teacher Mr. Yang because he criticized me strictly. Before that, I was so ashamed that I had no courage to see her again. To my surprised, Mr. Yang found me and apologized to me for his sharp words next day. He had said he could understand why I was so angry at that moment. Also, Mr. Yang hoped I could understand that he was so strictly with me because he thought I should have behaved better. What he had said or done made me very touching. Therefore, I was determined not to let him down any long.

      【答案】

      【1】quarrel改為quarrelled/quarreled

      【2】before改為after

      【3】her改為him

      【4】surprised改為surprise

      【5】words后加the

      【6】刪除had

      【7】strict改為strictly

      【8】or改為and

      【9】touching改為touched

      【10】long改為longer

      【解析】

      試題分析:本文屬于記敘文,我和Mr.Yang吵架以后,對(duì)方主動(dòng)向我道歉,這讓我很感到,決定不再讓對(duì)方失望。

      【1】quarrel改為quarrelled/quarreled 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句中was可知本文敘述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,所以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)quarrelled/quarreled。

      【2】before改為after 考查上下文串聯(lián)。和他吵架以后我感覺(jué)很羞愧沒(méi)有勇氣再次見他。所以使用after引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。

      【3】her改為him 考查代詞。根據(jù)上文Mr. yang可知對(duì)方是一位男士,所以使用him代替他。

      【4】surprised改為surprise 考查固定搭配。介詞短語(yǔ)to one's surprise讓某人驚訝的是。

      【5】words后加the 考查定冠詞。定冠詞the通常表示特指,本句中the next day在句中做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。

      【6】刪除had 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句介紹他向我道歉時(shí)的情況,不應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去完成時(shí),因?yàn)檫^(guò)去完成時(shí)表示過(guò)去的過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情。

      【7】strict改為strictly 考查形容詞。在英語(yǔ)中形容詞通常做定語(yǔ)或表語(yǔ),本句中形容詞strict與系動(dòng)詞was連用構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

      【8】or改為and 考查連詞。句意:他說(shuō)的話和所做的事情讓我很感動(dòng)。what he saiddone之間是并列關(guān)系,而不是選擇關(guān)系,所以使用并列連詞and連接。

      【9】touching改為touched 考查形容詞。形容詞touching另外感動(dòng)的,該詞通常修飾事物;而touched感動(dòng)的,該詞通常修飾人。本句使用touched對(duì)賓語(yǔ)me補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明,所以使用touched。

      【10】long改為longer 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。短語(yǔ)not any longer不再....;句意:因此,我決定不再讓他失望。

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