Question

16．假定你是李華，最近你在當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)紙上看到一則游泳培訓(xùn)班的廣告，稱(chēng)其有稱(chēng)職教練（ instructor），一周包會(huì)．你會(huì)一點(diǎn)游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假參加訓(xùn)練．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封咨詢(xún)信了解相關(guān)情況，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)．
2．條件和費(fèi)用．
3．其他特別注意的事項(xiàng)．
注意
1．詞數(shù) 100 左右．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                          Your s sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分巨型：
1．I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given，and how long the training course will last each day．我寫(xiě)信來(lái)是想咨詢(xún)這門(mén)訓(xùn)練課程將會(huì)在什么時(shí)間以及在什么地方舉行，并且每一天將會(huì)花費(fèi)多少時(shí)間．
2．Besides，would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary？除此之外，請(qǐng)問(wèn)你能不能夠告訴我需不需要準(zhǔn)備一些特別的東西，或者說(shuō)貴公司會(huì)提供所有必須品嗎？
when and where 用于特殊疑問(wèn)句中，先時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)再接地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，當(dāng)用于句尾時(shí)，應(yīng)為方式狀語(yǔ)-地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)-時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)．be done為被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，在文中表明該項(xiàng)課程是由該公司舉行，而不是這門(mén)課程本事舉行．
so+形容詞+as to do sth"如此…以致"，以一種非常委婉的語(yǔ)氣提出自己的問(wèn)題
whether…or…"是…還是…"，表示一種選擇

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．
I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking part in the training course．Fortunately，the summer holiday is around the corner．（高分句型）I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given，and how long the training course will last each day．
I also want to know how much you will charge me for that．
（高分句型）Besides，would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary？
   I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意提綱類(lèi)作文，所給出的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，不能漏掉任意要點(diǎn)，在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的正確使用，思路要清晰，針對(duì)每一要點(diǎn)，可以做出適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，以達(dá)到有理有據(jù)，并注意上下文的銜接．