Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔(dān)心。Jim的表現(xiàn)和你的看法及建議如下：

Jim過(guò)去	do well in lessons and take an active part in the activities at school
Jim現(xiàn)在	be crazy about computer games，have no interest in schoolwork，don’t listen to teachers carefully in class，can’t hand in homework on time
你的看法	playing computer games can make you feel relaxed，but if you spend too much time on it，you will have less time to study and it may do harm to your health
你的建議	……

寫作內(nèi)容：

根據(jù)以上信息給Jim寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. Jim的表現(xiàn)；

2. 你的看法和建議。

寫作要求：

1. 詞數(shù):100詞左右;文章開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)人名、校名。

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

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As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness. And best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and take an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to teachers carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in homework on time.

Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study and it may do harm to your health.

I hope you can achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored?

As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness. And best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇給材料的應(yīng)用文，寫一封信，向吉姆提出建議。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一二人稱，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如used to sth過(guò)去常常做某事；takepart in參加；as……as……和……一樣；hand in上交；on time按時(shí)；do harm to傷害；why not do sth為什么不做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。