Question

【題目】近來，中國游客在海外的不文明行為倍受爭議。假設(shè)你是李華，一名國際旅行社的導(dǎo)游，就此寫一篇短文在一份英文報紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點。請根據(jù)下面的提示完成作文。 1、列舉不文明行為；2、指出其影響；3、提出建議。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；

2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad．

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【答案】

As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

【解析】

試題分析：近來，中國游客在海外的不文明行為倍受爭議。假設(shè)你是李華，一名國際旅行社的導(dǎo)游，就此寫一篇短文在一份英文報紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點。請根據(jù)下面的提示完成作文。 1、列舉不文明行為；2、指出其影響；3、提出建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.句中使用了并列謂語；Measures should be taken to stop this.被動語態(tài)在句中體現(xiàn)；First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs.現(xiàn)在分詞和被動語態(tài)在句中同時出現(xiàn)；Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. It是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式短語；Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places.句中運用定語從句；I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country. 最后一句使用了賓語從句。