Question

16．當今社會很多人想助人為樂卻有所顧慮，請你給二十一世紀英文報寫一封信，講述你的同學李華在放學途中幫助一位摔傷老人的事情．
要點如下：
1．事情的經(jīng)過；                 
2．你的感想．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；   
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；     
3．開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）．
Dear editor，
Nowadays，an increasing number of people are reportedly unwilling to help othes．                     
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 此題主要考察敘述故事的能力，要求完整地描述一件事情的經(jīng)過以及感想．內(nèi)容也是實際生活中的內(nèi)容，所以我們在平時生活中要注意觀察和思考．在描述實際內(nèi)容時要做到言簡意賅．注意在書寫的時候，保證字跡工整，以及詞匯和語法的正確使用．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：重要短語和句子提示：an increasing number of people越來越多的人；on her way home在他回家的路上； Such is Li Hua，a helpful，positive and optimistic person．李華是一個如此樂于助人，樂觀的人；It is our duty to help people in need．去幫助有需要的人是我們的責任．
One day，on her way home，Li Hua came across an old man lying on the ground，seriously injured in the leg．（高分句型一）
Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good，I strong ly believe that she has done the right thing．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
       Nowadays，an increasing number of people are reportedly unwilling to help others．However，Li Hua acted differently．
       One day，on her way home，Li Hua came across an old man lying on the ground，seriously injured in the leg．（高分句型一）She immediately stopped，called 120 and practiced first aid．Soon，the ambulance came．When everything was Ok，she left for home．
       Such is Li Hua，a helpful，positive and optimistic person．Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good，I strong ly believe that she has done the right thing．（高分句型二）As responsible citizens，it is our duty to help people in need．Also，helping others means helping ourselves in a sense，doesn't it？
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Reader

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．