Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分

Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.

However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by. Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】suffered 改為suffer

【2】there改為it

【3】Most后的important改為importantly

【4】at改為on

【5】live后加a

【6】but改為or

【7】nothing改為something

【8】possibly改為possible

【9】passed改為passing

【10】himself改為yourself

【解析】

【1】suffered 改為suffer；考查情態(tài)動詞的用法。這個句子中有一個情態(tài)動詞will，后面若用動詞，應(yīng)用動詞原型。故將suffered 改為suffer。

【2】there改為it；固定搭配。It is important for sb. to do sth. 對某人來說做某事很重要。故將there改為it。

【3】Most后的important改為importantly；考查副詞。副詞可單獨使用，形容詞不可單獨使用。如generally speaking一般來說用的是generally而不是general.故將most后的important改為importantly。

【4】at改為on；固定搭配。have an effect on對…有影響，故將at改為on。

【5】live后加a；固定搭配。live a …life 過著一個..的生活。故在live后加a。

【6】but改為or；考查連詞。此處的“quarrel with others”和人爭吵，“fail in doing …”做…失敗了，是并列關(guān)系，都是說的不盡人意之事，所以沒有轉(zhuǎn)折的語氣。故將but改為or。

【7】nothing改為something；結(jié)合前后文，這一句的句意應(yīng)是，有的事情做失敗了。故將nothing改為something。

【8】possibly改為possible；固定搭配。as +形容詞+ as possible。故將possibly改為possible。

【9】passed改為passing；考查介詞的用法。with是介詞，后面的動詞只能用v-ing形式。且有這樣兩個短語表示隨時間的推移，with time passing ;as time passed 。故將passed改為passing。

【10】himself改為yourself；考查主謂一致。整篇文章以第二人稱的形式展開，且最后一句主語為you。故將himself改為yourself。