Question

19．假設你是班長，請結合以下要點給同學們談談一些不健康的生活方式及其可能造成的危害，并給同學提出一些建議．請據(jù)此寫一篇100詞左右的英語發(fā)言稿．
不健康的生活方式：
1．缺乏體育鍛煉，久坐不動
2．睡眠不足
3．不吃早餐
4．抽煙、喝酒、沉溺于網(wǎng)上游戲
注意：1．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)      2．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear fellow students，
I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm they may lead to．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇發(fā)言稿給同學們談談一些不健康的生活方式及其可能造成的危害，并提出一些建議，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內容要點包括：不健康的生活方式．1．缺乏體育鍛煉，久坐不動2．睡眠不足3．不吃早餐4．抽煙、喝酒、沉溺于網(wǎng)上游戲；可能造成的危害；提出一些建議．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為不健康的生活方式及其危害．第二部分為提出一些建議．
重點短語與句型：
What's worse 更糟糕的是
There is no doubt that毫無疑問
break down 累垮
sooner or later遲早
get rid of 擺脫
高分句型一：I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm that they may lead to．此句用了that引導定語從句．
高分句型二：What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking，which may ruin their health此句用了
what引導的主語從句，that引導的表語從句，以及which引導的非限制性定語從句．
高分句型三：Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life．此句only+介詞短語，主句部分倒裝．

解答 Dear fellow students，
   I'm going to talk about some unhealthy lifestyles and the harm that they may lead to．（高分句型一）In our daily life，we can see many of us lead an unhealthy life．Here are some examples：some of us don't take regular physical exercise and many lack sleep．Second，others keep on sitting for a long time．What's worse，some don't have a habit of eating breakfast．What is the worst is that some students even have been addicted to smoking and drinking，which may ruin their health．（高分句型二）（不健康的生活方式及其危害）
    There is no doubt that these unhealthy lifestyles do great harm to our health．If we don't change our way of life，we'll break down sooner or later．Therefore it is important for us to develop healthy lifestyles and get rid of the above bad habits．Only in this way can we keep healthy and enjoy our life．（高分句型三） （提出一些建議）
That's all．Thank you．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．