Question

【題目】書面表達

假設(shè)你是李華，計劃和同學(xué)去中山公園陪老師過教師節(jié)。請你給張路寫一封電子郵件，邀請她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：

1.出發(fā)時間：上午八點半在校門口集合，乘2路公交車去中山公園；

2.活動：欣賞花展，看戲劇表演，和老師們表演節(jié)目；

3.中午和老師們一起吃飯；

4.返回時間：下午五點左右；

5.帶相機給老師拍照。

注意：1 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Zhanglu,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit the Zhongshan Park on September 10 for the Teachers’Day.

We will gather at the school gate and take No.2 Bus to leave for the Zhongshan Park at 8:30 in the morning. There we can enjoy a wonderful flower exhibition where many kinds of flowers will be shown. We’ll see plays performed by the famous actors. The most wonderful thing will be our performing with our teachers, which will give us a good memory. At noon, we’ll have lunch together with our teachers. We’ll return at about 5:00 in the afternoon. If you are able to come, please let me know and take a camera with you, we’ll take many photos for the teachers.

I’m waiting for your early reply

Yours truly

Lihua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是給張路寫一封電子郵件，邀請她一同前往。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文可以按照提示的5點進行寫作。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時為主。4、注意寫郵件的格式。

亮點說明：本文按照提綱要求，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言連貫。同時使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如定語從句The most wonderful thing will be our performing with our teachers, which will give us a good memory.狀語從句If you are able to come, please let me know and take a camera with you.常用句型表達I’m waiting for your early reply.等。