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注意：詞數(shù)為100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

Now，more and more students are getting fond of western fast food，and thus they take in too much sugar and fat．【高分句型一】I don't think it good for their health．（學生的飲食現(xiàn)狀）

There are all kinds of foods in the world．Which one is healthier，the Chinese food or the western fast food？Different people have different choices．But as people are busier and busier with their work，more and more people choose to eat the western fast food because it is convinient to get it，though they may think that the Chinese food is healthier．【高分句型二】（對中餐和西式快餐哪種更健康有不同看法）

In my opinion，the Chinese food is healthier．Firstly，the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables．It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat．Secondly，the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes．It is nice to taste．I think it is the healthiest in the world．So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇應用文。要求給報社寫信。這篇作文要反映的是你對當今學生飲食的看法，應該用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。文章宜分為三部分：第一部分，表明寫信的目的。第二部分，介紹題目中要求的要點。尤其注意第三點要寫明自己認為中式快餐更健康的原因。 第三部分，書信的末尾寫上適當?shù)慕Y束語，可以表示祝愿，也可以表示期望等。

【亮點分析】1. 所給范文對要點介紹的非常清楚明確。第一段第一句點明了現(xiàn)在中學生的飲食現(xiàn)象。第二段中“Different people have different choices”表明第二個要點。第三段中用“In my opinion”點明第三個要點。2. 適當運用連接詞，使文章條理明確，上下文邏輯關系明確。例如第二段中的but，because，第三段中的firstly，secondly，so等。 3. 長短句交叉使用，疑問句，陳述句應用自然。