Question

15．你校高二年級(jí)計(jì)劃在下周一下午4：00-6：00在學(xué)校音樂(lè)廳舉行一年一度的英語(yǔ)劇演出．假定
你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)給你們外籍教師Louisa寫(xiě)封邀請(qǐng)函，請(qǐng)她擔(dān)任評(píng)委，對(duì)表演作簡(jiǎn)要點(diǎn)
評(píng)，并對(duì)獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)哳C發(fā)證書(shū)（ certificate）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Louisa，
How are you doing recently？
In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）I am writing to invite you，our amazing foreign English teacher，to be our judge．
The activity will be held in the Music Hall next Monday afternoon．The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00 pm，during which time 14 groups ofperformers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）
Your coming is highly appreciated and we are looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校高二年級(jí)計(jì)劃在下周一下午4：00-6：00在學(xué)校音樂(lè)廳舉行一年一度的英語(yǔ)劇演出．假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)給你們外籍教師Louisa寫(xiě)封邀請(qǐng)函，請(qǐng)她擔(dān)任評(píng)委，對(duì)表演作簡(jiǎn)要點(diǎn)評(píng)，并對(duì)獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)哳C發(fā)證書(shū)（ certificate），寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In order to以便，為了；At the end of 在…的最后；as well as 也，和；look forward to盼望；
In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual  activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）
The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00pm，during which time 14 groups of performers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Louisa，
      How are you doing recently？In order to enrich students'school life，our grade is to hold an annual  activity called English Drama Show．（高分句型一）I am writing to invite you，our amazing foreign English teacher，to be our judge．
      The activity will be held  in the Music Hall next Monday afternoon．The performance is scheduled from 4：00 to 6：00 pm，during which time 14 groups of performers representing 14 classes will compete together．（高分句型二）At the end of the contest，you are invited to make a brief comment on the contestants'performances as well as issue the certificates to the winners．（高分句型三）
       Your coming is highly  appreciated and we are looking  forward to your earliest reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．