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17．假設你是某校一名高三學生，被校學生會推選參加兄弟學校聯(lián)合舉辦主題為"怎樣成為一名效率高的學習者"的交流研討會，請按要求用英語寫一篇短文．內(nèi)容須包括以下要點：
•制定切實可行的學習日程表；
•合理分配各科學習時間，均衡發(fā)展；
•適當參加體育鍛煉；
•其他．
注意：1．短文標題和開頭句子已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可根據(jù)提示適當發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)：120左右．
參考詞匯：seminar n．研討會     agenda n．日程表   well-balanced adj均衡發(fā)展
How to Be an Efficient Learner？
Being Senior Three students，we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day．
                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 本文討論的話題是"How to Be an Efficient Learner？"可以從時間管理，預習復習，相同學老師借力等方面著手展開敘述，提高學習的效率．要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力．
亮點詞匯及句式   realistic agenda現(xiàn)實的計劃表  refresh our mind使頭腦清醒   All in all總之  well-balanced 均衡發(fā)展
Firstly，we should make a realistic agenda，which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover．（高級句型）
It's also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time．（高級句型）

解答 How to be an efficient learner？
Being Senior Three students，we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day．Because of limited time，it's important to be an efficient learner．But how can we become efficient learners？
Firstly，we should make a realistic agenda，which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover．（高級句型）Secondly，divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students．Thirdly，take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and ensure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons．Remember：All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．Besides，hold informal seminars to discuss with classmates about difficult problems and find best solutions．It's also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time．（高級句型）
All in all，efficiency is the key to success．

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