Question

【題目】假如你是班長，看到班上有部分同學在完成作業(yè)時，不是獨立完成而是經(jīng)常抄襲他人的作業(yè)。針對這種現(xiàn)象，你班召開班會課進行討論，請你以“My opinion on copying others’ homework”為題，在班會課上談談你自己的看法。

主要原因	1. 作業(yè)量大，偏難；
	2. 懶惰，對功課不感興趣；
	3. 完成任務，取悅老師和家長。
你的看法	1. 抄襲作業(yè)不誠實，違反校紀，對自己不負責任；
	2. 勤奮學習，有困難時請教同學和老師；
	3. 自擬（至少1點）

注意：1. 必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù)：150左右。標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My opinion on copying others’ homework

Today we are going to have a discussion about copying others’ homework. Here I’ll say something about it first. __________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Today we are going to have a discussion about copying other’s homework. Here I’ll say something about it first.

We all know some of our classmates copy other’s homework instead of doing it independently/on their own/by themselves. On one hand, they do so because they have too much homework to do at home and at school, some of which is beyond them/too difficult for them. On the other hand, some of the students are so lazy that they are not interested in their lessons at all. They don’t work hard and have to copy other’s homework just to finish the assignments and please their teachers and parents.

In my opinion, it’s dishonest of them to copy other’s homework, which is against the school rules. What’s more, copying other’s homework means cheating themselves. As middle school students, we should be honest, put our heart into our studies and finish our homework by ourselves instead of copying. When we have any difficulties/ problems with our homework, we can turn to our teachers or classmates for help. Only in this way can we make progress and take responsibility for our future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，假定你是李華，看到班上有部分同學在完成作業(yè)時，不自己獨立完成而是抄襲他人的作業(yè)，針對這種現(xiàn)象，請你以My opinion on copying others’ homework為題談談你自己的看法，所以要用第一人稱來寫，并且要用一般現(xiàn)在時。需要寫得內(nèi)容已經(jīng)以表格的形式給出，但注意不要生硬的去翻譯表格，要適當添加內(nèi)容。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理的使用連詞及從句。同時注意要求的字數(shù)100-120詞，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】首先要注意文章分段，這篇文章應該分三段，第一段是學生抄作業(yè)的主要原因，第二段寫這種現(xiàn)象的危害及解決辦法，第三段寫自己的觀點，陳述要點要全面，不能遺漏，對自己的觀點要有理有據(jù)，寫出令人信服的理由來，在寫作時，要有意識的用一些復雜句。如：It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework.這是that引導的主語從句，It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out.這是which引導的非限制性定語從句。另外在寫作時，也要注意考慮關聯(lián)的問題：如：On one hand, On the other hand, In a word, For another, As far as I’m concerned,都可以借鑒