Question

10．假設(shè)你是李華，新學(xué)期開始你校成立了學(xué)生健康成長中心，分設(shè)兩大功能區(qū)．根據(jù)下圖，給你的美國筆友Tom寫信，介紹該中心的情況；作為學(xué)生活動組織部部長，對全校的春季學(xué)生活動安排提出自己的設(shè)想并征求Tom的建議．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計(jì)入眾詞數(shù)． 
Dear Tom，
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Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
One is Psychological Consultation Room，where students can solve their emtional problems with our professional teachers．
高分句型二：
We'll spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．
句型一 where students can solve their emtional problems…該句是一個(gè)由where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，where在從句中是關(guān)系副詞，充當(dāng)?shù)攸c(diǎn)狀語
句型二 which we hope will make them happy．該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中替代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容
此外，該作文還使用了以下高級詞匯和短語：set up 成立  be intended to 打算做某事  look forward to 盼望

解答 Dear Tom，
  I have good news to tell you．The Students'Healthy Growth Center has been newly set up in our school，consisting of two functional areas．One is Psychological Consultation Room，where students can solve their emtional problems with our professional teachers．（高分句型一）The other office is intended to arrange the favourite school activities of our own．
   As an organizer of students'activities，I had a heated discussion with others about our spring plans．We're going to have a sports meet next month and the students of Grade one will visit the nursing home to help the elderly people．We'll spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．（高分句型二） What do you think of our ideas？
   Looking forward to your early reply．
 Yours，
 Li hua

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