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5．古人說讀萬卷書不如行萬里路，近代人強調知行合一，現(xiàn)代人認為知識要活學活用．請結合你的自身經歷，寫出你對書本知識和實際經驗的看法．字數：100左右．

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分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據提示信息古人說讀萬卷書不如行萬里路，近代人強調知行合一，現(xiàn)代人認為知識要活學活用．請結合你的自身經歷，寫出你對書本知識和實際經驗的看法．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、要在合理范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：in practice實踐中；Furthermore而且；on the other hand另一方面；In fact事實上；Moreover而且；
The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life．（高分句型一）
It is said that one learns best by doing，and I believe that this is true，whether one is successful or not．（高分句型二）
That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books．（高分句型三）

解答 Which is more important，knowledge from the book you read，or personal experience you gain in practice？The answer may vary from person to person．
       The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life．（高分句型一） Furthermore，we can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime，just by reading about them in books．
       Practical experience，on the other hand，can give us more useful knowledge．It is said that one learns best by doing，and I believe that this is true，whether one is successful or not．（高分句型二）In fact，I think making mistakes is the best way to learn．Moreover，if one wants to make new advances，it is necessary to act．That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．