Question

【題目】假如你叫李華。你的英國朋友John在學(xué)習(xí)中文時(shí)遇到了一些困難：如沒有充足的時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)中文、漢字很難學(xué)并容易遺忘、聽力不好等。他來信向你尋求學(xué)好中文的建議。

現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你用英語給他回一封信，按以下要點(diǎn)答復(fù)：

1.看中文的書籍和雜志以學(xué)習(xí)漢字；給中國的朋友寫信或發(fā)電子郵件練習(xí)書寫；

2.看中文電影練習(xí)聽力。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is it going? I’m writing to you because you asked me to help you with studying Chinese. I appreciate it very much that you desire to study this language, and I’m going to give you some advice.

First of all, you said that you didn’t have enough time to learn Chinese. In that case, I suggest that you read books and magazines in Chinese in you spare time to improve your level of vocabulary and you won’t forget the words which you’ve already learnt.

Secondly, you might write letters or e-mails in Chinese as well, because it can help you to practice what you have learned. Another good thing is to watch films in Chinese, which is quite useful to improve your listening skills.

You know, there are a lot of ways to study Chinese and improve your skills, but it all depends on you. I hope these suggestions will help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。要求是要寫一篇回信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是要寫一篇提建議的回信。英國朋友在學(xué)習(xí)中文時(shí)遇到了困難，想讓李華幫忙提出一些學(xué)習(xí)中文的方法，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）read books and magazines in Chines；write letters or e-mails in Chinese； watch films in Chinese等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如賓語從句和不定式的使用I suggest that you read books and magazines in Chinese in you spare time to improve your level of vocabulary and you won’t forget the words which you’ve already learnt.。非限制性定語從句 Another good thing is to watch films in Chinese, which is quite useful to improve your listening skills. 全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。