【題目】2019 年 10 月 1 日慶祝中華人民共和國成立 70 周年閱兵式在北京成功舉行。為了弘揚(yáng)愛國精神，豐富校園活動，你校（晨光中學(xué)）舉辦了關(guān)于觀看閱兵式的征文比賽，學(xué)生們 踴躍參加。請根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容為�？⑽膶趯懸黄獔�(bào)道。題目已給出。

①征文比賽的評選（評出優(yōu)秀作品、頒獎、獲獎?wù)魑恼故镜龋?/span>

②參賽作品的特點(diǎn)（反映閱兵場面、愛國熱情等）。

③自己的感想和愿望。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于 100；

2. 必須包含提示內(nèi)容；

3. 請勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；

4. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。

提示詞：閱兵式：military parade 愛國精神: patriotic spirit

Students Joined in The Essay Contest Eagerly

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【答案】Students Joined in The Essay Contest Eagerly

As was reported, the military parade celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China was successfully held in Beijing on October 1st, 2019. In order to carry forward the patriotic spirit and enrich the campus activities, Chenguang High School held an essay contest about watching the military parade.

The students took part in the essay contest actively. The best essays were voted and winners received the prizes. And there was an excellent essay exhibition in the teaching building. Meanwhile, all the essays showed the exciting scenes in the military parade and everyone's patriotic enthusiasm.

In my opinion, the essay contest was a good chance for us to show our love to our country. I really hope we could have more colorful activities in our school life.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇介紹征文比賽的文章。

第一步：審題。

　　體裁：應(yīng)用文。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

　結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式。

　　　　首段：介紹征文比賽。

　　　　中心段：介紹比賽的流程和特點(diǎn)。

　　　　尾段：發(fā)表自己的感想和愿望。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

As was reported；military parade；patriotic spirit； take part in；

patriotic enthusiasm； in one’s opinion

第三步：連詞成句

The military parade celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China was successfully held in Beijing on October 1st, 2019.

In order to carry forward the patriotic spirit and enrich the campus activities, Chenguang High School held an essay contest about watching the military parade.

The students took part in the essay contest actively.

The best essays were voted and winners received the prizes.

There was an excellent essay exhibition in the teaching building.

All the essays showed the exciting scenes in the military parade and everyone's patriotic enthusiasm.

The essay contest was a good chance for us to show our love to our country.

I really hope we could have more colorful activities in our school life.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改

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