Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華，你的澳洲朋友Devin參加漢語水平考試（HSK）未能通過，請你寫一封信，安慰一下你的朋友。內(nèi)容包括：

1.對考試失利的安慰；

2.對漢語學習提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Devin,

I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Devin,

I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.

As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese. A good luck next time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。你的澳洲朋友Devin參加漢語水平考試（HSK）未能通過，請你寫一封信，安慰一下你的朋友。內(nèi)容包括：對考試失利的安慰；對漢語學習提出建議。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】

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