最近科學(xué)家研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，現(xiàn)在的年輕人走路很少，這對于他們的健康不利�，F(xiàn)在請你把這個發(fā)現(xiàn)和專家的建議寫成一篇英語短文，以提醒身邊的人們要重視運(yùn)動，關(guān)注健康。以下是短文的內(nèi)容：

[寫作內(nèi)容]

研究機(jī)構(gòu)和對象：

The Researchers 雜志對2000人進(jìn)行調(diào)查

研究發(fā)現(xiàn)：

18-24歲的年輕人中有四分之一平均每天步行不到5分鐘

原因：

1. 很多人把步行少歸咎于科技的發(fā)展；

2. 有些年輕人覺得沒有人一起散步也是步行少的一個原因。

專家建議：

1.每天多步行，不要總是開車或搭公車；

2.每天多步行20分鐘可以降低很多疾病發(fā)生的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，如心臟病和中風(fēng)(stroke)。

[寫作要求]

只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

A magazine called The Researchers conducted a survey among 2000 people on their walking time. As is shown in the survey, a quarter of young adults aged between 18 and 24 walk no more than 5 minutes on average a day. Many people blame technology development for keeping them from walking while some young people owe the inadequate walking time to the lack of companion to walk with. Based on what is surveyed, experts suggest walking more everyday instead of taking the car or bus all the time. Moreover, it will be better for people to have extra 20-minute walk every day, which is believed to help reduce the risk of many diseases, including heart disease and stroke.

Version 2

A quarter of（one in four of/25 percent of/ one fourth of） young adults aged between 18 and 24 only walk an average of five minutes a day, according to The Researchers that surveyed 2,000 people. Most of the young people blamed technology development for keeping them from walking. Another reason given by young adults for not walking was that they don’t have anyone to walk with. The experts suggest having a daily walk instead of taking the car or bus all the time. Adding just 20 minutes walking every day can reduce the risk of many diseases, which includes heart disease and stroke.

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的，做題時包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。因?yàn)橹荒苁褂?個句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點(diǎn)，考生要多使用復(fù)雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用一些多變的高級句式，如定語從句的使用As is shown in the survey, a quarter of young adults aged between 18 and 24 walk no more than 5 minutes on average a day.和Moreover, it will be better for people to have extra 20-minute walk every day, which is believed to help reduce the risk of many diseases, including heart disease and stroke.和Adding just 20 minutes walking every day can reduce the risk of many diseases, which includes heart disease and stroke.及非謂語動詞Based on what is surveyed, experts suggest walking more everyday instead of taking the car or bus all the time.等；高級詞匯和短語的靈活運(yùn)用，如blame … for …，reduce the risk of等

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。

 

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