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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 把缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(\)畫掉。

修改: 在錯的詞下畫一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

Answer 1

【答案】When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The main problem was in\ that I always thought in Chinese tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her .Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was good one. I was encouraged by their words.

【解析】試題分析：本文是關(guān)于學(xué)英語的故事。

【1】run→ran 講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時態(tài)，故把run改為ran。

【2】去掉in in不與that連用，that引導(dǎo)表語從句。故去掉in。

【3】Chinese→English 我總是用漢語思考而且盡量把一切翻譯成漢語。故把Chinese改為English。

【4】advices→advice advice是不可數(shù)名詞，故把advices改成advice。

【5】talk→talking enjoy doing sth.喜歡做某事。故把talk改為talking。

【6】me→myself express oneself表達自我。

【7】showed后加it “給某人看……”應(yīng)用show sth to sb。代詞it 放在showed和to 中間。

【8】very→so so...that...如此……以致于……，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，故把very改為so。

【9】the→a 句意：每個人說這是一個好故事。故把the改為a。

【10】great→greatly 副詞修飾動詞，故把great改為greatly。

【知識拓展】

1.動詞或動詞詞組后面用動名詞作賓語

enjoy；finish；avoid；be fond of ；give up ；look forward to； get down to； devote---to---； be used to (習(xí)慣) ；spend---(in) doing sth.； object to 。

2.mean doing意味著做某事， mean to do打算做某事； regret doing后悔曾經(jīng)做過某事，regret to do遺憾地去做某事； try doing 嘗試做某事，try to do努力去做某事； forget doing 忘記曾做過某事，forget to do 忘記要去做某事；remember doing記得曾經(jīng)做過某事， remember to do記得要去做某事。

【學(xué)法指導(dǎo)】

such…that作“如此…以致”解,連接一個表示結(jié)果的狀語從句.與so…that

意思相同,但用法不同.如：so…that這一結(jié)構(gòu)中,so后邊可加形容詞或副詞,

而such后邊要用名詞（這個名詞前面可以帶形容詞,也可以不帶）.因此,

such…that的句型結(jié)構(gòu)可分以下三種：

1) such＋a(an)＋adj.＋單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞＋that…clause

He is such a clever boy that everybody likes him.他非常聰明,大家都非常喜歡他.

He was such an honest man that he was praised by the teacher.他非常誠實,因而受到了老師的表揚.

2)such＋adj.＋復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞＋that…clause

They are such interesting novels that I want to read them once again.這些小說非常有趣,我想再讀一遍.

3)such＋adj.＋不可數(shù)名詞＋that…clause

He has made such great progress that the teachers are pleased with him.他進步得很快,老師們對他感到很滿意.

注意：如果such后邊的名詞前由many、much、few、little等詞所修飾的話,則不用

such而用so.例如：

He had so many falls that he was black and blue all over.他摔了很多跤,以致于全身上下青一塊,紫一塊的.

He had so little education that he was unfit for this job.他所受教育很少,不適合做這個工作.

There were so many people in the street watching the fire that firefighters could not get close tothe building.街上有那么多人觀看大火,以致于消防隊員無法接近大樓.